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Liz Zimmers's avatar

This one is a punch right to the gut. A drag through the under-crypt of corpse horror. Aagh! I was right there with liquefying Brandon, god, the experience! This was a supernova, Ken.

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Ken Flyingheart's avatar

Thanks Liz! Really love this comment! It's wrong how much I enjoy doing this. Maybe *I'm* a bad place, too.

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Liz Zimmers's avatar

You expose the bad places, and how! You’re a superhero!

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Jim J Wilsky's avatar

Whoa. Just whoa. 'Back the truck, the fuck up' as my buddy used to say. Going to reread this at least once. Terrific stuff, Ken. You are on your game, nothing but net. - Jim

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Ken Flyingheart's avatar

Thank you, Jim! Seriously. I'm always so glad when you enjoy one of my stories. And I'm always thankful for your support of an unhinged dabbler!

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Jim J Wilsky's avatar

Read it again this morning and, well...I uh, want you to stay away from me. (backing up slowly) You hear me? (pointing) I mean it.

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Jennifer James's avatar

Ken, this was brilliant. The main character's careless evil is too real to be ignored. Whatever trauma he initially experienced, is doesn't seem to have translated to regret or guilt. That's a special kind of bad.

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