Well I really liked this- great sci-fi feeling, things going on that makes me curious to find out - even though you did not seem to have much good to say about it in the intro! Definitely a keeper and a keep going IMO. 😊🙏🏼✨
Thanks Tracy! I think this is the first comment I’ve gotten from you, so I must have done something right with this one! I’m already past the next one, going strong. For now, at least!
Like I said in my restack, if I could get a novel of this, I would eat that up. I wasn't reading this story I was living it; I was there in the shop watching things unfold--I was there in the street firing the gun. (also loved that you said the back windshield turned to "milk".) Anticipating part 2 of 2.
Very well might turn out to be novel length. Although I’m geographically stuck right now. Hate it when reality gets in the way of plotting the end of the world.
Great unsettling atmosphere and teeth grinding suspense Ken!
Thanks, Jon! It fought me the entire way but it’s shaping up. Hope I can keep it going!
Well I really liked this- great sci-fi feeling, things going on that makes me curious to find out - even though you did not seem to have much good to say about it in the intro! Definitely a keeper and a keep going IMO. 😊🙏🏼✨
Thanks Tracy! I think this is the first comment I’ve gotten from you, so I must have done something right with this one! I’m already past the next one, going strong. For now, at least!
I am definitely a fan 😊😊
Nice! Love me some Lovecraft-inspired tales! Well done!
Thank you! June is Lovecraft. Although it's becoming a gigantic undertaking!
I love the way you unfold a story Ken. how the details emerge over time until the reader is totally enraptured. it’s masterful.
Thanks EJ. These posts are costing me, though. Much harder than my usual shorts. Newfound respect for novelists!
Like I said in my restack, if I could get a novel of this, I would eat that up. I wasn't reading this story I was living it; I was there in the shop watching things unfold--I was there in the street firing the gun. (also loved that you said the back windshield turned to "milk".) Anticipating part 2 of 2.
Very well might turn out to be novel length. Although I’m geographically stuck right now. Hate it when reality gets in the way of plotting the end of the world.
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It's going fantastic, once you tough your way through it you can edit it to become that dark nightmare of your dreams.
Looking forward to part 2 of part 2, and then part 1 of part 3 and so on into the cosmic miasma of infinity.